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[quote='staff0rd','index.php?page=Thread&postID=77765#post77765']One of the Thorwalians bumps into Gerbod on passing and looks at him with a penetrating gaze. Spitting noisily, he mutters in a dark tone "You don't look like a rafter or a passenger. If you got no business, stay out of my way". As he starts to walk towards to get another create of goods, then Gerbod says;[/quote]Crisp tone exists. If someone behaves or speaks in a crisp way, they are confident, polite, and firm, but not very friendly.

Rest of your corrections are right.

In that case, it would be appropriate to change "mutters" to "speaks" as an alternative fix.

Thank you, Text adapted for Patch 1.33