altarThe semicircular space with seating made of tree trunks dominates the room around the small alter
Besides there is a switch between present and past tense:
When she notices you, she is giving you an intense look.A votary is carefully arranging a decoration of ferns and wildflowers. When she noticed you, she was giving you an intense look.
fightThis can be useful in a fi ght and help to resist spells
influencingA hero with high charisma will have an easier time of infl uencing or at least pacifying
Tavern game: Knife Throwing:
at a targetThe opponents throw the knives on a target which ...
(and maybe a space is missing between "of 5 feet." and "The"
to hitThe aim is to make the inner ring
And again, switching between present and past tense here:
Various guests are pushing around the throwers and watching them eagerly. Even the innkeeper pauses cleaning a mug ...Various guest are pushing around the throwers and watched them eagerly. Even the innkeeper paused cleaning a mug. Is that a worried look on his face?
is it rings, really, or rather "ring"? To me this game sounds like a game of darts (just with knifes), and every round I have to hit one ring, don't I?Calissa hits no rings this round.
and.... hits the inner rings this round
... hits the fourth rings...
occasionalYou can hear occational laughter