[quote='staff0rd','index.php?page=Thread&postID=77765#post77765']One of the Thorwalians bumps into Gerbod on passing and looks at him with a penetrating gaze. Spitting noisily, he mutters in a dark tone "You don't look like a rafter or a passenger. If you got no business, stay out of my way". As he starts to walk towards to get another create of goods, then Gerbod says;[/quote]Crisp tone exists. If someone behaves or speaks in a crisp way, they are confident, polite, and firm, but not very friendly.
Rest of your corrections are right.
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